“Striving to perform beyond my client’s expectations …
Gina Cox will welcome you home!”
Dear Friends and Family,
I hope you are having a wonderful summer making memories and enjoying your families. The new school year is sneaking up on us! Time is flying by and life is ever changing. Speaking of change, I have some great news to share with you! I recently completed an intensive training program through the XXXXXX training, combined with my love of the profession and my affiliation with XXXX, one of the area’s leading real estate companies, gives me the skills I need to meet my customers’ real estate needs.
If you are aware of anyone interested in buying or selling a home, I would love it if you would provide them with my name, as I would be pleased to help them with any real estate needs they may have. I also would be happy to refer your out of town friends and family to our terrific World-Wide Relocation Department. I have enclosed a few of my business cards for you to pass along.
And, if you should require any real estate information or assistance, feel free to contact me. I would be happy to answer any questions you may have to help you with all of your real estate needs. I look forward to seeing you soon.
Thanks again for your support, friendship and prayers.
Sincerely,
Gina last name,. all my numbers and email addresses.
posted by gina at 9:55 PM Permalink
12 Comments:
I LOVE IT!! Don't forget to add business to that last line, friendship, support, prayers, and business! LOL
I LOVE IT G! :) Start looking for my house. :) xo
10:16 PM
i think it's very professional and i think you'll be great. But you forgot to sign Gina and Tonic.
xxxx
11:00 PM
Just don't use Kurt's catch phrase.
11:08 PM
love it! you did a great job!
Natalie
11:26 PM
I think you said "real estate needs/questions" one time too many.
11:27 PM
OMG KURT you are right. i will take one away.
2:19 AM
"Striving to perform beyond my client’s expectations "
How about
"Exceeding client’s expectations"
Less prepositional more pep.
2:56 AM
Looks great to me.
4:16 AM
Hey, did you know you actually put your last name at the top? Was that meant to happen?
6:21 AM
Sounds groovy! :o) Go get 'em! xoS
6:33 AM
“Striving to perform beyond my client’s expectations …
Gina will welcome you home!”
using "my" then talking in the third person doesn't match up. try to re-word that line a little.
but other than that.. cause that's just being nit-picky... it's a pretty solid letter.
7:14 AM
it's me Gina!
8:24 PM
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